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the warm spring wind
gives me life
no one desires to defend;

they call me Weed,
stomping me down
to the level of Crabgrass
and Poison Oak,

although I harm none
with my meager
existence.

I can grant your wishes
as your cold breath
sends shivers down my
stem; I can

thrive on the dream-fields
of children, who still
call me Flower.
Exercise from my Creative Writing class... we had to write from an interesting POV. She gave us a few choices, one of which was a weed.

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shep4life Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013   Writer
Glad you enjoyed it!  :aww:
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really well done
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful piece.
great final stanza.
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013   Writer
Thank you! :D
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :)
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi, hon!

I'd LOVE your permission to read this for :iconelocutionists:'s wordpress blog/gallery.

Let me know if you're okay with that?
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013   Writer
Sure thing! I would be honored to have a poem read by you! :la:
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent, thanks!
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013   Writer
Sure thing! Send me a link once it's up so I can add it to my comments. :aww:
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