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November 29, 2012
Lingerie by ~SurrealCachinnation
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Suggested by AzizrianDaoXrak
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Every woman owns one garment
that remains tucked away,
saved for special occasions
when it will be seen.

It is almost always midnight
black, or blood red, and
covered in lace, or made
of mesh, soft and delicate
as the skin it covers.

Such things should be hidden,
lest the owner be labeled
as something other than "lady."

It has a power we can't
control, one that transforms
denim and cotton clad
ragdolls into Barbies,

perfectly proportioned plastic,
smooth and flawless hourglasses
that turn on command.

We groan and flinch
as satin strings pull us
apart and together,
and heartstrings are plucked
as we scrutinize our reflection;

we are not diamonds
with perfect exteriors--
we are fractured, as we
realize hourglasses can be exchanged
for quartz watches that are
faster, more convenient,
incapable of failure
made by the obsolete.
An assignment, inspired by The White Dress by Lynn Emanuel.

Edited 11/28/12
(Hopefully) Final Edit 12/2/12

Original version read aloud by the talented =SilverInkblot : [link]

Featured by DailyLitDeviations: [link]
Thank you to =SilverInkblot for suggesting my piece, and to =DrippingWords for featuring it! :la:

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OH. MY. GOD. Was this ever a pleasant surprise. I'm speechless. :faint:
Thank you so, so, so much to =AzizrianDaoXrak for suggesting and ^NicSwaner for featuring!
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But an hour glass is more reliable than a watch, and though it may not keep time perfectly, or be fast, it will always be there. And that is more important.