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I have been walking our oceans again,
having held on forever to the hope of knowing
the dialogue of the tides.

The clouds never spoke pounding melodies,
only echoes into the nothing.

The stars whispered a lie that tells the truth:
You waited, praying to fireflies, and
I wanted to be someone else.

You're never touching anything,
singing me oblivion and creating destiny
with a void dance and erotic spills:
eloquent tradition like petals and leaves.
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i-am-a-bridgewalker Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh wow this is a really awesome idea. and you definitely dug into the heart of the two lines you got from me. 

third stanza is beautiful.
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013   Writer
Thank you!  :heart:

I'm glad you like the way I used your lines.  I always hope when I do these that the artists like them.
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013   General Artist
a well-deserved DLD! <3
congratulations, kae darling! :huggle:
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013   Writer
Thank you, lovely!  :hug:
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iamPoetry Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So lovely!
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013   Writer
Thanks!  :aww:
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013   Writer
Congratulations on your DLD, dear! :clap:
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013   Writer
Thanks!  :hug:
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013   Writer
You're very welcome! :hug: It was well deserved. 
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013   Writer
Aww, shucks.  :blushes:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here. Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013   Writer
Thank you!  :heart:
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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nuisances Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for using a title of mine for this, I am honored that it was of inspiration or help to you!
It's a beautiful poem :heart:
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013   Writer
Sure thing!  :heart:
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I loved the style here. :)
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013   Writer
Thank you.  :aww:
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Christianonfire7 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful!
Thank you for using three of my pieces to create it, I'm humbled! :hug:
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013   Writer
What can I say?  Your pieces have excellent titles.  :glomp:
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Gobba42 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Writer
I'm not sure what this poem means, but I love the second and third lines.  Its really nice imagery to have the tides and the beach having a dialogue, and it sounds beautiful.
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   Writer
If you liked those lines, you should definitely check out the poems whose titles I used.  Especially ~Vigilo's for the imagery.  :nod:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Gobba42 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Writer
Oh yeah, his poem is great!
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   Writer
Had you already read it before my title poem, or did my title poem lead you to it?  If it's the latter, I'm so glad to see someone checking out the links.  That's the whole point of this project, I think.  Getting lots of people exposure.
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Gobba42 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Writer
No, thanks for directing it to me.
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013   Writer
Sure thing.  :la:
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