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I have been walking our oceans again,
having held on forever to the hope of knowing
the dialogue of the tides.

The clouds never spoke pounding melodies,
only echoes into the nothing.

The stars whispered a lie that tells the truth:
You waited, praying to fireflies, and
I wanted to be someone else.

You're never touching anything,
singing me oblivion and creating destiny
with a void dance and erotic spills:
eloquent tradition like petals and leaves.
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i-am-a-bridgewalker Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh wow this is a really awesome idea. and you definitely dug into the heart of the two lines you got from me. 

third stanza is beautiful.
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013   Writer
Thank you!  :heart:

I'm glad you like the way I used your lines.  I always hope when I do these that the artists like them.
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013   General Artist
a well-deserved DLD! <3
congratulations, kae darling! :huggle:
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013   Writer
Thank you, lovely!  :hug:
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iamPoetry Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So lovely!
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013   Writer
Thanks!  :aww:
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013   Writer
Congratulations on your DLD, dear! :clap:
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013   Writer
Thanks!  :hug:
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013   Writer
You're very welcome! :hug: It was well deserved. 
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013   Writer
Aww, shucks.  :blushes:
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