literature

With Rain on our Tongues

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I have been walking our oceans again,
having held on forever to the hope of knowing
the dialogue of the tides.

The clouds never spoke pounding melodies,
only echoes into the nothing.

The stars whispered a lie that tells the truth:
You waited, praying to fireflies, and
I wanted to be someone else.

You're never touching anything,
singing me oblivion and creating destiny
with a void dance and erotic spills:
eloquent tradition like petals and leaves.
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i-am-a-bridgewalker's avatar
oh wow this is a really awesome idea. and you definitely dug into the heart of the two lines you got from me. 

third stanza is beautiful.